Wednesday, October 29, 2025

Bink's descriptive writing

 Mermaid Pools

As soon as I took one step into the Mermaid Pools, I was in love with the warm and clear water.

I could hear the white wash waves crashing against the slippery, grey rocks. As I sniffed the air, I could smell the salt water and the brown and black seaweed.

I could see my feet through the crystal clear water as I walked deeper and deeper into my favourite swimming place. 

I could feel the slippery, soft seaweed as I dived down to look around for treasure on the bottom of the pool.

As I licked my face, I could taste the salt water. 

When I'm here I feel great because it feels as good as gold. Wouldn't you want to go?



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